An Organized Review of The Reading Materials

When I reading this poem "submariner",we can find the tercet are rhymed a b a

and the quatrain are rhtmed a b a a.

This poem has two repeat sentences like "I wanna be a submariner" and "way down

deep in under the water".

I make sure the writer puts the repeat sentence for rhyme and reinforce the reader

feelings.

Some words in the poem are a pun like blue ,cold,heart...and so on.

This is a hypertext poem so the poem has sound and picture.

But the writer make the poem put too many subjective factor form his hypertext work.

In a word,he put that his thoughts of sound and picture.

Maybe make readers do not find out their feelings.

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